BIG thank you to all the writers who shared pieces. I was honoured to read your work! sorry I couldn’t get to more but I’ll try my best to do another video in the future, if there’s interest. please be considerate in the comments to fellow writers, etc etc ☀️
☁️ featured writers
1 bumblebee
2 Adam Fishkin
3 Livy
timestamps:
0:00 intro
1:12 important disclaimers
2:16 submission 1 (CW - physical aggression)
3:07 initial thoughts, verb tense, phrasing, colloquialisms
7:38 sensory detail, simplifying, figurative language
13:04 imagery and description
15:55 shifting POV and dialogue rhythm
19:04 submission 2 - tone and form
24:11 submission 3
24:52 openings and spooky vibes
26:47 characterization and relationships
29:40 example edit and character voice
37:30 share your thoughts!
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more videos:
✨ line-editing my YA fantasy: https://youtu.be/YUajQLBrZdE
✨ writer envy and book revisions (vlog): https://youtu.be/cocqNi_WUNs
/ about /
i'm kris (she/her), writer/aspiring author, mostly writing speculative fiction. on this channel i'm documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and general bookish shenanigans ☀️
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