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In this video, I share a formula that can be used to tell if your fantasy battle scenes are working - or failing. This formula will also guide you in creating better fight scenes that grip readers and advance your plot in the most enthralling way possible.
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Intro
00:29 - The Excitement Equation
01:41 - Concern
03:12 - Making characters more interesting
07:35 - Making readers care about the battle
08:53 - Propulsive prose
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