Learn how to write captivating fantasy characters with my free course: https://jedherne.com/character-course/?video=nuRne36LkNs
⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction
00:30 - No subtext
02:38 - Clone Speak
10:20 - Not reading it out loud
11:50 - InfoDialogue
15:21 - Over-reliance on dialogue
19:44 - Aimless conversations
24:50 - Anachronistic phrases
28:04 - Formatting issues
32:00 - Poor tag choice
35:04 - Repeated ideas
📙 MY BOOKS:
Across the Broken Stars: https://jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstars
The Thunder Heist: https://jedherne.com/thethunderheist/
Fires of the Dead: https://jedherne.com/firesofthedead
Kingdom of Dragons: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons
🎮 MY VIDEO GAME:
Siege of Treboulain: https://jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details/