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The most "meh" scene in this great series, this Chem Baron meeting sequence needs some work, and really the whole arc could do with a big tweak. Though it does lead up to a great moment with Sevika choosing between Finn and Silco, the lackluster scene that introduces the plot is not only boring for us, Silco even implies that it boring for him! The arc is literally skippable (a new viewer wouldn't notice that it was edited out), and the characters themselves lack any development, even the minimal amount necessary for bit characters. There are good aspects to the scene, and it's not terrible by any means, but in comparison to the rest of the show, it's noticeably lacking. Let's see if we can fix it...
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0:00 - Intro
0:20 - the BAD
3:33 - the GOOD
6:01- AWKWARD
6:45 - Fix #1
9:53 - Fix #2
12:54 - Fix #3 (FINNDAD)